Mushroom High: The Hero

The first one I did. He's alright, but there's something about him that's lacking the life that Peachie and Bowser have.

Mario's fatness was pretty fun to draw, though.

EDIT: I've been looking at this and I'm getting concerned. He's supposed to be my protaganist, but I'm not feeling that connected with him. What do you guys think is missing? What would making him a more interesting/appeal design?